My First Time to Be a Volunteer1

As the saying goes，“When you give roses， their fragrance lingers on your hand."Volunteering isimportantforteenagerstoachievetheirdreams and growasindividuals.

Myclassorganizedavolunteeractivitylast year.Itwasmy first time being a volunteer，so I wasso excited. We got up early and gathered in thePorridge Housewhere weplannedto serve breakfasttothestreetcleaners.We firstvisited the houseunder the guidance of our teacher. Then we were divided into groups to finish different tasks.

Mygroup poured theporridge into a bigbucketand moved itoutside.Bythen thecleanersoutsidewere alreadywaitingfortheirmeals.We served them porridgeand steamed bread inan orderly manner. Seeing the grateful smiles on their faceswhile working，Ifeltdeeplysatisfied.

Thisexperience helpedmeunderstand that helping others isone of the best ways to feel happy and fulfilled. Itwas truly unforgettable！

指导老师 刘改香

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文章开篇点明志愿服务活动对青少年成长的价值和意义，主体部分能够用“got up“gathered”“planned”“visited”“were divided”“poured”“moved”“waiting”“served”“seeing”“felt”等系列动词详细记录本次爱心粥屋送粥活动的经过，充分体现了作者对生活的细致观察以及扎实的语言功底。（剩余0字）