My City

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佳作发现地：江苏省徐州市桃园路小学

I live in Xuzhou. There are many interesting places， such as Yunlong Lake（云龙湖）， Yunlong Mountain（云龙山）， and Guishan Han Tomb（龟山汉墓）. My favourite one is Yunlong Lake. It is like a big silver mirror. I can go boating on it. The people are also very kind and warm-hearted. Welcome to Xuzhou！

六（1）班 谢佳辰

Xuzhou is a beautiful city. You can visit Xuzhou Museum， Baolian Temple（宝莲寺）， Pengzu Garden（彭祖园）， and so on. I like Pengzu Garden best， because there are many beautiful flowers， slides， and pirate boats（海盗船）. My city is full of joy.

六（2）班 刘倬熙

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