My Father

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陈传光男，江苏省连云港市罗阳中学高级教师、连云港市新333 工程教学标兵、连云港市优秀教育园丁，从事教育教学工作多年；曾获英语专业技能大赛市一等奖及班主任基本功大赛市一等奖；有多篇论文在各核心和主流期刊上发表。

Look at that handsome man. Do you know who he is？ Please allow me to tellyou. He’s my father.

My father looks tall and strong. He is a worker. Although he’s more than 45years old， but①he looks very young. He often goes to play ping-pong ball with meafter work. He tells me it is good for healthy②to do sports. He likes English songsbut he doesn’t sings③very well. In his spare time， he likes cooking and singingsongs for me.

Now you see， my father is a good man and great father. I love him very much.

江蘇省连云港市罗阳中学王芹芹

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