My Happy Day

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Last Saturday， I went shopping with my parents.

There were a lot of people in the mall.

This mall is very big and bright.

Dad bought a pair of sneakers， mum bought a bag， and I bought a toy.

After shopping， we shared a delicious pizza.

Mum also bought me a yummy ice cream.

It was a happy day.

江苏省南京市南化实验小学四（6）班 冷梓晴

指导老师 刘雨萌：

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