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编者按:新年伊始,很多朋友来稿跟我们分享了自己的新年计划。由于版面有限,在此精心挑选了四篇优秀文章,并随文附上外编的点评。愿各位在新的一年中心想事成!言必行,行必果,实现所有的new year resolution!

上期主题:My New Year Resolution

上海 Vera Liu

This year, I wanna be a better person.

I will continue to love my beloved families; take care of them, and appreciate very minute while staying with them. My old father has spent fifties years working for difficult life since he was a little, innocent boy. As his younger daughter I can do nothing for him except to repay him with my love, time and care. Also I will give my mother, the woman I admire deeply and mostly, a bunch of delicate flowers. All these years I wish to see her laughter from time to time, which can light my heart and bring me courage.

I plan to work harder and prove who I am. Work is work, which deserves all my attention and passion if I refuse to fall into dust. Day by day I promise myself to be a better employee who can handle things handsomely and patiently.

Finally, I decide to find my Mr. Charming with all my efforts. Maybe he has been feeding his white horse all these years in the corner of a vast plain. Or maybe he just got lost on the way to me, not because I am such a weird girl, absolutely not.

In the coming new year, I just wanna show a new refreshed face in front the whole world and tell every one there I’m OK.

外编点评:作者语法运用能力很强,行文清晰自然,但是也有一些复数方面的错误,例如,应该是“my beloved family”、“fifty years”。(剩余4479字)

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